Official Move Approval IV

[Mark]

Shining Victory: I understand the slowness but I was more looking for a number. Maybe 1 MPH or something? Just trying to remove any ambiguity. So 75 feet is the maximum size at the 50 foot version is just if it’s not charged to full power? Also bear in mind that with an attack this large the damage will be watered down a good deal vs. a smaller attack that hits only one thing.

I know that going into this , retooling it for final approval 

Move : Love Love Shining Victory ( T1 super ) ( Requires ranged proficiency , homing proficiency , area attack proficiency ) ( 600 om 
) Description : A 50 foot in diameter ball meant for taking out a mob of enemies all at once , made of pink light energy 
Speed : Very slow - 10mph 
Damage : Large
Stamina drain : Moderate
Distance : Far but looses effectiveness after 45 feet 
Focus needed to cast and keep on target
Can not be used while moving
Can not be charged while moving 


Drawbacks : The large size of this attack makes it incredibly slow and easy to dodge 

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Move two : 


Name : Eda Special combo ( 300 ) ( Requires strength proficiency ) 
Description : A combination of charged strikes , finishing the combination with a blast of lightning 
Damage : Moderate
Stamina drain : Low
This attack is a melee combination and could only be used at close range 

Drawbacks : Eda's low str and def will make this attack hurt her almost as much as what she is hitting normally

Shining Victory is approved.

For the Special Combo, is the lightning bolt thrown from the hand or something, or does it just strike from the sky? If it's a projectile you'll need to list its dimensions and range (I'm assuming since it's described as lightning that the speed is comparable to like, lightning from a storm. If not, I'd list that too).

Not applicable. I'm not sure what you even want to know by in motion for this move given that it is a specific set of movements required to activate. Concentration has no application here, Prinny reflexively fires a beam if you hit him on the head hard enough. Probably could be easily used in conjunction with throwing spoons since while landing on Prinny she can be actually focused on aiming and throwing spoons. An advantage of using two characters in an attack, and has nothing to do with the move description.

I’m asking you if the Prinny can be moving while firing the beam and if the Prinny were to be struck or distracted if the attack would be interrupted, as that hasn’t been addressed.

These speed descriptions are getting out of hand especially as a move for Enel just passed muster without mentioning speed at all.

I’m literally reading from the first post of this thread that describes how to write a move. I asked for clarification because while someone might consider fast to be the speed of an arrow, others might think of a bullet. I’m trying to clarify something that was left vague.

As for the bits about whether moves can be used together, I’m fully aware of how the TEC stat works. I’m asking because it plays into the concentration bit. In the future, please just answer yes if the answer is yes.

All others moves are approved with the mentioned clarifications and additions.