09-02-2016, 06:16 PM
Variant B - Colosseum thread Gamzee Makara
Very interesting opening, makes me curious how he got in that coffin.
Admittedly, I never thought Gamzee worked at a circus. I know he had a circus theme to his attacks, but I didn’t know he literally worked at a circus at some point (I haven’t read homestuck x.x)
Though, the connection between the circus tent and the medical tent was pretty good, got to learn more about the character just from one set of random thoughts.
Makes me wonder what the sickly sweet taste in his mouth was. Nice to have that standard “Welp, primes can heal” moment, but also contrast that with your tired and beaten face. That’s Omni for ya, he’ll keep you alive but appearances is your own damn responsibility.
Oh Karkat, you are Adam’s best fwiend :3
Wow, this is an intense scene. Who knew Makara could get so rabid when he’s scared?
Also, interesting use of that particular trope where we start in the present and then showed what happened. Admittedly, I didn’t expect you were going that direction, I kind of figured the mess he woke up to was going to be chocked up as a noodle incident.
Oh god, Karkat took one for his friend. 0.0
Wait, his blood literally smells like cherries?
XD Karkat’s destiny was to caress Makara and comfort him? Magic hands!
The knight of blood’s confusion on Karkat’s final words made me lol.
Gamzee! You should know better than to touch another man’s horn while they are asleep!
I like Karkat uncertain of what curse to use. Hahaha
Well, you’re writing has a lot of character, and the entire scenario is very clever and unique! Glad I read it!
Very interesting opening, makes me curious how he got in that coffin.
Admittedly, I never thought Gamzee worked at a circus. I know he had a circus theme to his attacks, but I didn’t know he literally worked at a circus at some point (I haven’t read homestuck x.x)
Though, the connection between the circus tent and the medical tent was pretty good, got to learn more about the character just from one set of random thoughts.
Makes me wonder what the sickly sweet taste in his mouth was. Nice to have that standard “Welp, primes can heal” moment, but also contrast that with your tired and beaten face. That’s Omni for ya, he’ll keep you alive but appearances is your own damn responsibility.
Oh Karkat, you are Adam’s best fwiend :3
Wow, this is an intense scene. Who knew Makara could get so rabid when he’s scared?
Also, interesting use of that particular trope where we start in the present and then showed what happened. Admittedly, I didn’t expect you were going that direction, I kind of figured the mess he woke up to was going to be chocked up as a noodle incident.
Oh god, Karkat took one for his friend. 0.0
Wait, his blood literally smells like cherries?
XD Karkat’s destiny was to caress Makara and comfort him? Magic hands!
The knight of blood’s confusion on Karkat’s final words made me lol.
Gamzee! You should know better than to touch another man’s horn while they are asleep!
I like Karkat uncertain of what curse to use. Hahaha
Well, you’re writing has a lot of character, and the entire scenario is very clever and unique! Glad I read it!
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