Official Move Approval IV

[Eda]

Going to scrap the last two and try for something else entirely


Name : Ice spear - ( 300 om ) ( Requires strength proficiency ) ( Requires Rnged proficiency )
Description : Caster manifests a spear or trident made of ice , can be thrown at opponent for damage
Description 2 : Spear is 7 feet long , can be a spear or trident form 
Range : Wielders reach + 7 feet - Maximum throw range of 35 feet
Damage : Moderate 
Cast time : 30 seconds to a minute
Can be used with other Ice based attacks 
Can be summoned while moving
Can not be aimed while moving
Requires time to focus to summon
Moderate stamina cost 

~ attack 2 



~ Attack 3

Name : LOVE LOVE SHINING VICTORY !! ( 600 om ) ( Requires ranged Proficiency ) ( Requires area attack proficiency ) < (  t1 super ) 
Description : A hilariously large ball of light cast down in the direction of casters target 
Range : From above Eda's head to target , loses effectiveness at 30+ feet 
Damage : Large - this attack was meant to ko a target / targets .
Speed : Very slow - Likely would be described as a glacial speed
Casting speed : Takes roughly 2 minutes to cast 
Size : 50 feet in diameter ball  
The attack on impact explodes to cause weak splash damage around it
Stamina drain - Immense - This is meant for a last ditch spell when all else fails . Can exhaust the caster for up to 5 hours

Ice Spear: What’s the summoning time? Can this be used with other moves? As for damage, the amount would have to be a set value, it can’t deviate. If your opponent wanted to RP it hurting more from being hit in the neck or something that’s up to them, but it can’t suddenly do more damage. 

Lightning Storm: For the damage, you’d have to choose a rough amount of damage you’d like it to do, as being resistant to magic isn’t possible in the Omniverse. Also bear in mind the more foes this hits the less damage it will do. The cast time also seems pretty long, especially with it needing such a large amount of concentration. Does it only effect people within the 10-foot range? You’ll need Area Attack for this, as well. Can it be used with other moves? You can decease the charge time to under a minute if you’d like. This kinda reads as more of a Super Attack as is, with the large energy cost, large damage, and lengthy charge time. Up to you whether you want it to be a regular or a super, though.

Shining Victory: Can you be more exact with the speed? You can decrease the charge time if you’d like, 3-5 minutes is a very long time in a fight. What do you mean by charging to an even larger size? 

Fixing these now

Ice spear would be like a summon for a weapon - Taking roughly 30 seconds to a minute to summon
could be used with other ice focused moves 
I  fixed the damage to a set Moderate as well if that works

My long cast times are her drawback to her moves being powerful as they are



Scrapping lightning storm for now , needs some refining

Shining victory would have a very slow speed traveling considering its size 
As for charging to a larger size think the death ball styled attacks , how they can be tiny or massive depending on the time spent charging them 
I fixed as much as I could and dampened the charge time and damage for shining 
It should be balanced and a better description of the speed as glacial , Eda would need to use it close range for it to be effective really 

~ Ironing out one more thing , if these are still a no go I will scrap them and try once I have fixed them