08-20-2016, 11:16 PM
Your spoiler tag 'Description' seems empty, unless my computer is derping out. Make sure to put in a picture for us.
Daggers - Solid. Good to go. They're knives. Check.
Coins - How far can the coins travel? You mention they're buggered by physics, but about how far can they go? Will he only ever have 5-6 coins on him? Or is that just how many he can hold in his palm at a given time?
Steelpush/Ironpull - I need to re-read this in the morning, but it seems okay to me. I have a similar concept move with some of my characters.
Daggers - Solid. Good to go. They're knives. Check.
Coins - How far can the coins travel? You mention they're buggered by physics, but about how far can they go? Will he only ever have 5-6 coins on him? Or is that just how many he can hold in his palm at a given time?
Steelpush/Ironpull - I need to re-read this in the morning, but it seems okay to me. I have a similar concept move with some of my characters.