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Official Move Approval IV
Lacerate (Ranged Proficiency, 300 O.M)
Blood Mage Attack 1
With a wave of your hand, gashes appear over the target's body
Encounter [Image: Star.gif] Arcane, Implement
Standard Action
Ranged 10
Attack: constitution Vs. Fortitude
Hit: 2d4 + constitution modifier damage
Effect: The target takes ongoing damage equal to twice your constitution modifier until the end of your next turn.
(This is the D&D explanation for reference, the omniverse version is below)



This move uses blood magic to open wounds on the opponent, depending on their defence, if it is greater than the attack of the user by more than one, ,there is no effect. It opens wounds much like paper cuts, not deep or especially painful on their own, but continued use is more painful. It is an instantaneous technique, though not very powerful, and travels in a straight line from the caster. Once activated, it moves as a three foot diameter net, ,traveling at about ten feet per second. It is not difficult to aim, being a fire and forget technique. Once the user fires it, they can move, but moving while casting will interrupt the spell. It will not hinder the opponent's movement at all. It is activated by the caster simply stating "Bleed", and pointing at the opponent, at which point the net of blood will form and move straight at the opponent. Ultimately, it feels like multiple paper cuts initially,. Any sort of healing or regeneration will completely negate it as well. It is also a fixed move, no variations possible


Posted again as per Omni's request


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Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 07-13-2015, 02:17 PM
Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 08-30-2015, 06:24 PM
Moves PSA - by Omni - 10-30-2015, 05:59 PM

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