Official Move Approval IV

[Omni]

Reposting for approval 

I am going to try here to iron out a move or two for later purchase

Tier 1 super move : 

Love Love Magic cannon ( 600 om ) ( Requires ranged proficiency ) ( Requires homing Proficiency ) 

Description : A huge cannon ball of magical energy , while it might look silly being a bright pink hue and shaped like a heart . Its effects are devastating, however it has some heavy drawbacks for its power 

Casting speed : Slow can take up to 3 minutes to build up
Attack will home in and chase target until either target is hit or attack is lost to hitting a large target - I.e hitting a building or another target 
Can be charged while moving 
Can not be fired while moving 
Can not be aimed while moving
Requires tremendous concentration to cast , just as much to fire 
Distance : Point blank to fifty feet
Travel speed of attack : Near glacial - this attack is huge but terribly slow
Size : A heart shaped cannon ball of nearly 100 ft in diameter
Stamina drain : Large - Can exhaust the caster ~ will become Moderate as character gains levels  
Damage : High - This can flatten its target , but is a last resort for the young mage

Tier 1 super move : 

Love Love Thousand Broken Hearts : ( Requires ranged Proficiency ) ( Requires Area attack Proficiency ) ( Requires ranged materialize Proficiency )

A rain of pink heart shaped projectiles , made to counter large mobs of enemies 
As the name implies number of projectiles - up to 1000
All projectiles spawn at once 
Attack has enormus range but terrible accuracy 
Size of projectiles : Small pink heart shaped , roughly the size of a ( united states ) Quarter
Can be charged while moving 
Can not be fired while moving 
Can not be aimed while moving
Casting speed : Fast - 15 to 30 seconds 
Damage : Weak - similar to her magic blast 
Travel speed : Fast - 10 feet a second 
Travel distance : Far
( ^ Might need some balancing yet )

I nerfed the description of the first move a bit, "punching holes in people's bodies" would be only if you get the move off as a killing blow when you've already won the fight. Devastating is a suitably vague word that still implies its power. We'd rather you put that checklist into an actual description but we can approve it if you want.

You'd need a description for the second one.

Is it okay if I use the version above which cuts the speed way down in return for making it a bit more likely to fry the nervous system of whoever hits?

Sure!