08-19-2016, 04:43 PM
(08-19-2016, 08:24 AM)Erik Vrell Wrote: Horror Nova (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency) (300)You gave an example for the upper end of the effect, but what about the lower end? Or I guess more relevantly, an average effect for a user of similar TEC to Erik, somewhere in the middle of the Nova.
Erik collects his power for three seconds before throwing back his head and releasing a burst of violet energy. Any enemies caught in the blast will start to hallucinate a variety of horrors, dependant on the fears of the affected foe, as long as Erik maintains the nova. The hallucinations will continue to grow more vivid as long as enemies remain in the area of effect. The rate of which they grow realistic is dependant on the foe's TEC and their distance from Erik. The nova will be maintained as long as Erik concentrates. The hallucinations will quickly dissipate after the affected parties leave the nova. The hallucinations are just that: hallucinations. They cannot hurt or otherwise touch enemies, so a smart foe can bypass them entirely. This move is quite tiring to maintain. The nova has a radius of 5 metres.
At its maximum, the hallucinations look real, with almost no way to distinguish then from real monsters (expect for the fact that they can't touch you). Against an enemy with 1 TEC, for example, being right next to Erik would cause the hallucinations to become life like after 5-10 seconds, but if hey were at the edge it would take up to a minute. The fear effect is more or less a distraction. Someone could RP being frozen with fear, but if they don't want that it'll be little more than a scary distraction. Erik can move his arms, albeit slowly, while channeling the nova, but can't walk. Erik requires a moderate amount of concentration to sustain the nova, and also cannot use any other moves, with an exception for Mageslayer, but he loses a lot of fighting skill while channeling.
You specified enemies so I'm guessing it doesn't affect allies. It might need a little nerfing as its a pretty big and strong AOE right now, we'll see when you give me the average effect.
(08-19-2016, 10:25 AM)King Sombra Wrote: Dark Storm Arts - Lightning- Area Attack, Debuff, Ranged, Ranged Materialize, Remote Control and Homing (300 OM)Given the extreme power of the move and the fact that it can be remote controlled or made to be homing, I'd like to see something like it leaving King Sombra exhausted and unable to move for a few seconds afterwards. The ten tasers thing is also a bit much so I removed it, I also fixed what I assume is a grammatical error (but --> and). I'd also remove the "slow-moving" bit. Arrows aren't slow-moving
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Gathering dark magic to the tip of his horn, King Sombra will say. “So, you want to play with the thunder? How about a taste of the lightning?” Once he says that, he’ll create about 4 bolts of lightning made out of dark magic that he can control. Each of these packs the intensity of ten tasers. Suffice it to say they can immobilize an opponent QUITE well. They can also be remote controlled by him, and home in an opponent. This move is very taxing, requiring that he charge it for 8 seconds. The usage of the move severely depletes his energy reserves. Furthermore, it has a four second cool down. Another problem with this move is that it requires most of his concentration, while using it he can’t normally perform other moves. Distracting him during this move is possible, and would cause him to suffer moderate damage due to the electricity he’s playing with. These are moderately strong, and travel at the speed of an arrow. While they are slow moving the bolts will certainly at least damage if not outright fry the nervous system of whoever they hit. Suffice it to say, you really don't want to get hit by one.

(08-19-2016, 01:01 PM)Trixie Wrote:(08-19-2016, 09:35 AM)Ebony Wrote: Katana-300 O.M.
It is just a simple katana, nothing special, which forms upon the wish of the user. The user does not have to do anything except use the weapon as you usually would a blade, nor does it do anything else special.
Gonna help you out here.
Katana - 300 OM
This katana is forged of rolled carbon steel and sharpened to a razors edge. The tang is wrapped in black leather and laced with an intricate white thread. Presently the weapon is summoned only when the user wishes it into existence for use. A simple bushido drawing motion materializes the weapon out of pure omnilium. Weighing about 1.5 kilograms the weapon is light and fluid in its motion. The finely forged blade is 73 centimeters in length with a line of blackened steel running along the cutting edge. The weapon is a basic bladed weapon and is capable of cutting through anything a common 14th-century blade could.
Approved.
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