08-19-2016, 04:33 PM
Lacerate is far too powerful for an instantaneous, 3-foot diameter move with no significant downsides.
This: "When describing how powerful a move is, try not to use wording like "cuts through skin" or "breaks bones". This is because the damage of an attack may vary depending on your current transformed state, and your opponent's DEF stat in relation to your ATK. It's best to leave this somewhat vague."
is also relevant in terms of saying "about half a point of damage per minute'.
Taking away the damage-over-time effect and mention of fixed damage and simply saying that it attempts to create small paper cuts (to an opponent of similar DEF to Ebony's ATK) would be more on-balance. Given that it's instantaneous, how often can she cast it? Rapid fire?
Blood Rage can't be approved, see the description for Buff Proficiency.
Buff Proficiency – 400 OM (Example move)
Allows you to create moves which provide beneficial effects to allies at cost to yourself (usually time and/or energy). While this might seem pointless, pooling one's powers can be a very effective strategy, especially against overwhelming foes. Boosting or adjusting one's own stats requires a Transformation. Significant stat boosts require the use of a Super Move in conjunction with this proficiency.
This: "When describing how powerful a move is, try not to use wording like "cuts through skin" or "breaks bones". This is because the damage of an attack may vary depending on your current transformed state, and your opponent's DEF stat in relation to your ATK. It's best to leave this somewhat vague."
is also relevant in terms of saying "about half a point of damage per minute'.
Taking away the damage-over-time effect and mention of fixed damage and simply saying that it attempts to create small paper cuts (to an opponent of similar DEF to Ebony's ATK) would be more on-balance. Given that it's instantaneous, how often can she cast it? Rapid fire?
Blood Rage can't be approved, see the description for Buff Proficiency.
Buff Proficiency – 400 OM (Example move)
Allows you to create moves which provide beneficial effects to allies at cost to yourself (usually time and/or energy). While this might seem pointless, pooling one's powers can be a very effective strategy, especially against overwhelming foes. Boosting or adjusting one's own stats requires a Transformation. Significant stat boosts require the use of a Super Move in conjunction with this proficiency.
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