08-19-2016, 09:54 AM
(08-19-2016, 08:58 AM)Queen Glory Wrote: Moves:
Venom Spit: (300 OM) (requires Ranged Proficiency and Debuff Proficiency) (for both RainWing forms)
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Description: Two black streams of venom are fired out of Glory's longest fangs. The user must unhinge their mouth all the way open, like a snake, to spit this venom. It travels up to 12 feet long for the Anthro Form and 24 feet for RainWing form. The venom requires minute concentration, so less so that it can be interwoven with punches, kicks, and claw attacks easily. Venom Spit cannot be used with other moves. Venom Spit can be used while moving.
It takes around 3 seconds for Glory to open her mouth all the way and concentrate on spitting the venom.
Venom Spit does not tire Glory out. Instead, she has a very limited supply of it that, if continually used, will drain itself in about 1 minute.
The venom dissolves its target at an alarming speed. The speed of dissolving is even faster when the venom is sprayed at a wound or in the eyes.
In the Wings of Fire universe, the venom only worked on organic matter. Here, however, it can dissolve non-organic matter as well. However, if Glory is fighting, say, a robot, the venom would dissolve the eyes at the same speed as the body.
A Prime or Secondary would need to be 4 DEF or over to survive the venom, but be wounded and scarred horribly (the debuff) and 6 DEF or over to shrug off the venom.
Okay, I'll get to the other issues later, but here's the big one. Basically, you're saying that to even just survive this, you have to have 4 DEF. That's not gonna fly. Also, can't see any drawbacks besides limited supply. Also not gonna fly. Add some caveats, and make sure the thing is survivable at the very least. Then we'll talk.