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Official Move Approval IV
Eda

(Yesterday, 07:08 PM)Eda Wrote: Wrote:I am going to try here to iron out a move or two for later purchase

Tier 1 super move : 

Love Love Magic cannon ( 600 om ) ( Requires ranged proficiency ) ( Requires homing Proficiency ) 

Description : A huge cannon ball of magical energy , while it might look silly being a bright pink hue and shaped like a heart . Its effects are devastating . This attack can punch holes in the body of its target , however it has some heavy drawbacks for its power 

Casting speed : Slow can take 3 - 5 minutes to build up
Attack will home in and chase target until either target is hit or attack is lost to hitting a large target - I.e hitting a building or another target 
Can be charged while moving 
Can not be fired while moving 
Can not be aimed while moving
Requires tremendous concentration to cast , just as much to fire 
Distance : Point blank to fifty feet
Travel speed of attack : Near glacial - this attack is huge but terribly slow
Size : A heart shaped cannon ball of nearly 100 ft in diameter
Stamina drain : Large - Can exhaust the caster ~ will become Moderate as character gains levels  
Damage : High - This can flatten its target , but is a last resort for the young mage


You don’t need to make the cast time so long. 30 seconds is probably the maximum you’d need for something like this. I want to mention though that having a 100 ft beam is going to give you extremely diluted damage. The larger it is, the less damage it does to things it hits. As for the homing, normally you’d need some kind of time limit or something to offset the edge you get from homing but being that it’s a Super and moves so slowly I can let that go. 


~ Eda has a penchant for firing it point blank , I will keep the longer charge time because of the damage it can do if it connects . 
~ Forgot to add in that if used at point blank it can hurt her pretty terribly also 

Other than that is the move ok or do I need to edit it more 


Quote: Wrote:Tier 1 super move : 

Love Love Thousand Broken Hearts : ( Requires ranged Proficiency ) ( Requires Area attack Proficiency ) ( Requires ranged materialize Proficiency )

A rain of pink heart shaped projectiles , made to counter large mobs of enemies 

Can be charged while moving 
Can not be fired while moving 
Can not be aimed while moving
Casting speed : Fast - 15 to 30 seconds 
Damage : Weak - similar to her magic blast 
Travel speed : Fast - Sky to ground impact in 15 seconds
Travel distance : Far


What’s the size on the projectiles? For travel speed, can you give me a more precise number? Depending on where in the sky you’re referring to, that number can be a pretty wide range. Around how many projectiles are there, or how long does this last and how fast do they spawn? Does this require concentration to maintain?


~ Edited second move to fix the issues 


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