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Creatia Weatherly
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You don't need to make the summoning time for the naginata so long. Since you're buying it as a move you can summon it on-the-fly in battle if you'd like, maybe a few seconds to summon if you don't want to carry it around all the time. Also, if it's purely a melee weapon in its current form, the move would only have Physical Strength as its requirement. The rest of the proficiencies you've listed I'm assuming are for the potions you mentioned, but since you don't have them yet I'd take out the extra profs until you buy the new moves. Similarly, I'd remove the second half of the description after the description of the Soul Gems, as it's kinda confusing to have that described when you don't have a move for it.

As a side note for later, you wouldn't need the spell time to have an hour channeling time if it's something you'll be using in battle as fights usually last nowhere near that long. The charge up time would be much shorter, probably less than a minute unless the effect is very strong. Specifics will be worked out later, but I thought I'd mention that now.
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Creatia Weatherly - by Creatia - 08-14-2016, 09:58 PM

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