Official Move Approval IV

[Omni]

I included all of my power suggestions for CV in a comic for visual adaption, if you guys don't mind. My plan is 300 OM for the first four, 600 for the Tier 1, 800 for Tier 2, and 1000 for the Tier 3. This is just for future reference and I don't intend on buying any of them right away.

Could you write these out? As cool as the comic format is at making them easier to understand, it's difficult to critique without the text there to reference/edit.

Oh, sure!

MEGA-Paddle (300 OM) - [Summons a Pong Paddle to deflect attacks. Grows or shrinks depending on how much focus is used. Lasts for a minute.]

As a general overview, you're going to be needing to include more detail. I'd have a good read through of the OP/moves rules.

This one would be variable and you need to include detail on how big or small it can be, how powerful it is, et cetera.

SUPER-Laser (300 OM) - [Shoots a laser as fast as a bullet. User MUST stay stationary. Aiming is key and focus is a must. Happens in a blink of an eye. Requires 15 seconds of cooldown.]

• What does it look like? How is it performed? How does it feel to get hit with it?

ULTRA-Reflect (300 OM) - [HUGE focus for this one. Creates the opposite of a black hole, causing incoming objects to be repelled away. This last for a couple of seconds before needing a recharging period of five minutes.]

How powerful is it? How big is it? Is it instantaneous, or quick to use? Or is it slow? (Almost instantaneous? A moment? Several seconds? Longer? Be specific.)

EXTRA-Power (600 OM) - [Tier 1 - Powered up form. He gains a significant amount of SPD (up to 5) and TEC (Up to 4) while lowering his DEF and ATK. This form lasts for a minute and has a cool down of five minutes.]

Erm. You have to be absolutely specific here. Not 'up to'. Give the actual stats.

GIGA-Attack (800 OM) - [Tier 2 - Powered up form. He gains a significant amount of ATK (up to 5) and DEF (Up to 5) while lowering his SPD and TEC. "Fueled by his anger, CV has achieved GIGA mode." he has attained this long ago and learned to control his anger. If used properly, his body adapts to combat. This lasts for a max of 2 and a half minutes with a cooldown time of 10.]

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META-Meditation (1000 OM) - [Tier 3 - Powered up form. He gains a significant amount of TEC (up to 10) and DEF (Up to 10) while lowering his SPD and TEC. CV has transcended and reached enlightenment. Nothing can harm him anymore. This lasts for a maximum of five minutes. With multiple SP, the cooldown period is 15 minutes.]

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Don't just answer the questions, focus on creating bigger descriptions that really describe everything you would need to know about the moves. I ask this to skip back-and-forth "needs more details" steps with questions and answers that usually happen with super-sparse move descriptions like this. Again, look at the previous examples in this topic and that should help you.

Name of Move:  Particle Beam Rifle (Weapon)  
Price of Move:600
Proficiencies Required:  Ranged Proficiency,   Area Effect Proficiency. 
Description of Move:  



Drawing the particle beam rifle constructed at Fort Zimmer out of the holster across his back,  Warren will say. “You’ve done it now. I’m no longer holding back.”  There are two ways that he can use the particle beam. First he can use barrage mode which shoots a burst of low intensity pathetic damage shots at an opponent that only need 2 seconds of charge.. The second is the  more dangerous of the two.  This is called “Vaporize”  mode and shoots a high intensity 3 foot by 6 foot diameter blast at the opponent. It has an effective range of 70 meters.  This mode takes 15 seconds to charge. 
The low intensity mode has 15 shots before the power cell needs to be swapped out which takes about two seconds. Using ‘Vaporize’ mode consumes all of that power in a single shot requiring the power cell to be almost instantly changed out.  This is somewhat taxing on him and so he doesn't often rely on it.

Approved!

Name:  Chaotic Quarter-Spear Staff (Weapon) 



 



Price: 900 OM



Proficiencies Required:  Ranged Proficiency,  Area Attack Proficiency,  Physical Strength Proficiency. 



Description of Move:   A quarterstaff that was found by Warren in Camelot.  This staff doubles as a spear but also has another function to it.  The staff has been outfitted with Magitechnology that allows it to shoot bursts of purple energy that do a moderate amount of damage.  The staff  is able of course to be summoned whenever Warren needs it.  It takes 5 seconds to switch ‘modes’ of the staff.  The spear mode is capable of being used for melee combat,  or thrown at an opponent. The blasts don’t drain much energy but they are not very accurate. This shoots 1 blast every 3 seconds. 


This spear is about 20 centimeters in length. It can be thrown 20 meters.

*Believe I fixed everything. 

Approved!