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Official Move Approval IV
(08-07-2016, 10:54 PM)King Sombra Wrote: Dark Flare (300, Debuff,  Ranged. Ranged Materialize. ) 
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Gathering dark magical energies to the tip of his horn King Sombra will unleash the dark magical energies in an equivalent to a 'Flashbang' but with darkness that causes increased sensitivity to light. This doesn't do much actual damage but would make it agonizing for people to be in well lit areas and lasts until they can heal themselves. This barely requires any of his energy to use. It's very accurate and has a range of 100 feet. This will wear off should they heal themselves or be affected by any form of Light Magic. 

Crystal Spike Shot: (300, Ranged Materialize,  Homing, Debuff.) 
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Gathering dark magical energy King Sombra will create a single jagged piece of crystal that will be shot at him by his opponent. This spike of crystal explodes when it gets near an opponent, pelting them with tinier shards of crystal. It's purpose is to slow them down by damaging the muscles in the legs or the arms should such an attack be successful. This takes him 3 seconds to make and is very accurate due to being able to home in on an opponent thanks to his creating this spell.


Dark Flare
-- You list it as needing Ranged Materialize. Does that mean it can appear somewhere else besides the tip of his horn? If so, mention that.
-- Lasting until they are healed isn't going to fly, especially since people without regeneration or a healing item would just be stuck for the remainder of a battle that way. Make it a specific duration. Remove the bit about being effected by light magic altogether.
-- You say it's accurate out to 100 feet, is that the range he can summon it at with ranged materialize? If not, what does that mean?
-- What is the actual area this effects? It's a flashbang, so obviously more than one person.
-- Does this effect Sombra himself, if he's caught in its area?
-- How long does it take to ready the anti-flashbang?
-- Can it be used while moving, and/or with other moves?
-- Can the charge for it be broken while being prepared?

Crystal Spike Shot:
-- The way this is worded, it first starts off with Sombra getting shot at. Fix that.
-- This needs ranged materialize, but for what purpose? Can he create it at any location within a certain range? If so, what is that range?
-- What is the range on the crystal once it's fired?
-- What is the area of effect when the crystal explodes?
-- How strongly does this home? Does it just curve toward its target to make dodging it difficult or will it go full-on sci-fi heat-seeking missile and actively follow them? If the latter, how long will it do so?
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