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New Samus style - minimal thoughts and dialogue
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I don't criticized too much on anyone's writing since I'm not a very talented writer but for me what you wrote was easy to follow along and was entertaining. The action wasn't really complicated to read but I thought it had the right amount of details and it didn't gone overboard explaining what's happening.

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