08-23-2016, 11:44 AM
I don't criticized too much on anyone's writing since I'm not a very talented writer but for me what you wrote was easy to follow along and was entertaining. The action wasn't really complicated to read but I thought it had the right amount of details and it didn't gone overboard explaining what's happening.
"Iz goog!"
- Kung Fury, 2016
"Iz goog!"
- Kung Fury, 2016
