Official Move Approval IV

[Omni]

Bumping Dark Matter Footbomb. Also.

Name of Move:  Particle Beam Rifle (Weapon)  
Price of Move:600
Proficiencies Required:  Ranged Proficiency,   Area Effect Proficiency. 
Description of Move:  



Drawing the particle beam rifle constructed at Fort Zimmer out of the holster across his back,  Warren will say. “You’ve done it now. I’m no longer holding back.”  There are two ways that he can use the particle beam. First he can use barrage mode which shoots a burst of low intensity pathetic damage shots at an opponent,  that don’t require but 2 seconds to charge up. The second is he more dangerous of the two.  This is called “Vaporize”  mode and shoots a high intensity 3 foot by 6 foot diameter blast at the opponent. It has an effective range of 70 meters. 
The low intensity mode has 15 shots before the power cell needs to be swapped out which takes about two seconds. Using ‘Vaporize’ mode consumes all of that power in a single shot requiring the power cell to be almost instantly changed out.  This is somewhat taxing on him and so he doesn't often rely on it.

Could you clarify the bolded bit? I think there is a bit of a broken sentence there.

Name of Move:   Death Sphere 

Price of Move:  300 OM 

Proficiencies Required:  Ranged Proficiency,  Area Attack Proficiency. 

Description of Move:   Gathering up the energies of dark magic,   Warren will create a sphere of energy about the size of a mini van.  This orb is colored black and purple. When it is made it hovers in the air above him.   







But when he snaps his fingers the orb will lower onto the battlefield up to 30 feet away,  and detonate doing a moderate amount of damage to anyone who is actually caught in the blast of the move. The blast is about ten feet across, and fairly compact, without much effect beyond the ten foot zone.This move does have multiple disadvantages.  One of these is that it cannot distinguish between Friend or Foe.  Anyone who is in the area when this blast goes off will be hit by it unless they can somehow protect themselves from it.  This move takes him about 15 seconds to make and 5 seconds to prime the attack before he can actually utilize it.  It cannot be done without the Chaotic Quarter-Spear Staff being in his other hand. 


Due to the amount of energy this uses,  Warren will not often use this move unless he is in a dire situation or outnumbered. 

Approved.

Name:  Chaotic Quarter-Spear Staff (Weapon) 

 

Price: 900 OM

Proficiencies Required:  Ranged Proficiency,  Area Attack Proficiency,  Physical Strength Proficiency. 

Description of Move:   A quarterstaff that was found by Warren in Camelot.  This staff doubles as a spear but also has another function to it.  The staff has been outfitted with Magitechnology that allows it to shoot bursts of purple energy that do a moderate amount of damage.  The staff  is able of course to be summoned whenever Warren needs it.  It takes 5 seconds to switch ‘modes’ of the staff.  The spear mode is capable of being used for melee combat,  or thrown at an opponent. The blasts don’t drain much energy but they are not very accurate.


This spear is about 20 centimeters in length. It can be thrown 20 meters.

What's the rate of fire on the spear blasts? One every second?