Ha so ALL 3 of them were done by your group Gin (other than the unyielding awe of my amazing writing partners throughout this saga).
GIN GOT SLAPPED.
That journal thing you wrote was was perfectly paced, and also allowed the audience to choose their own demon to imagine.
The last was Remmy okay I was a bit behind which I just read which struck me as perfection. "She looked back down at the tear and gave a long frown. She liked this dress."
This for numerous reasons, the most obvious perhaps, being the parallel to RIP AND TEAR. The other, probably the more amused side. Being my own feelings about when something HAPPENS TO YOUR FAV OUTFIT. Kinda random, kinda NOT. Take it as you will, but I know myself to enjoy the little things.
Edit: Ghoul Amber is also awesome
GIN GOT SLAPPED.
That journal thing you wrote was was perfectly paced, and also allowed the audience to choose their own demon to imagine.
The last was Remmy okay I was a bit behind which I just read which struck me as perfection. "She looked back down at the tear and gave a long frown. She liked this dress."
This for numerous reasons, the most obvious perhaps, being the parallel to RIP AND TEAR. The other, probably the more amused side. Being my own feelings about when something HAPPENS TO YOUR FAV OUTFIT. Kinda random, kinda NOT. Take it as you will, but I know myself to enjoy the little things.
Edit: Ghoul Amber is also awesome