07-27-2016, 08:45 AM
(07-26-2016, 06:23 PM)Mick Rory Wrote: 1. I'm not trying to make it broken.
2. I guess I'm back to work on this.
3. I don't plan for Mick to use the Cold Gun in the future.
4. I didn't even think of that.
Here's yet ANOTHER try...I'm getting tired of revising, but I guess I kinda have to if I want Snart to be useful.
It does indeed fire a beam of it's respective element, represented by a beam of light blue and white energy. The beam charges for 3 seconds and lasts for 15 seconds of continuous fire, after which the beam stops. It still has to be reloaded after 4 blasts are fired. However, the move is less powerful in exchange for a complete lack of cooldown time. The constant beam reaches a maximum range of 12 meters - a 2 meter increase from that of it's counterpart - and those far away from the blast do take less damage. The beam is 1 meter all around, circular, and goes at a speed of 10 miles per hour. Beams are fire and forget, however, they aren't easy to aim. They always go a bit off-center from the barrel. The beams are pretty weak.
The target, upon being hit, is frozen lightly, moving slower, however the effect cancels out that of the light burns provided by the Heat Gun, and vice-versa. The freezing lasts for about 5 seconds, but cannot be stopped before the effect stops taking place unless the Heat Gun hits the target.
The weapon, when used with the Heat Gun at the same time, has an additional caveat - if you cross beams with the Heat Gun, the vastly conflicted temperatures will rocket back at the weapon opposite of their element, destroying them both until Mick takes the time and Omnilium to fix them. This weapon is one-handed, and can be used in conjunction with other one-handed weapons or moves. Snart can keep up to 8 ammo clips on him, but there is a caveat that he can't gather more ammo easily - he either has to get lucky with searching, or have Mick summon more.
There is an additional caveat; You move half as fast whilst firing, preventing Snart from easily dodging whilst attacking.
Please don't get snarky with Mark, he is trying his best to help you get your move approved.
Also, please rewrite this move with a proper move description. As it is, it looks highly disorganized and is confusing to read. Remember, when we write a move, we need to be as clear as possible about what it does. This is to ensure that others can understand it, and so that staff can help you balance it if it needs to be balanced.