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Official Move Approval IV
(07-23-2016, 11:00 PM)Frisk Wrote: Stained Apron - Tier 1 Powered-Up Form (1000)

An apron suddenly appears on Frisk’s body in a flash of light. It is brown with a pink heart emblem on the belly, ancient food splatters are encrusted permanently into the fabric. The clothing acts as a set of armor, protecting against attacks. While she is donning this form, her soul turns a forest green hue.

ATK: 0
DEF: 5
SPD: 5
TEC: 5



Frying Pan (300) Physical Strength, Stained Apron

Your standard steel frying pan. The main part of the pan is 10” by 10” with a 6” handle. The bottom is scorched from overuse. Frisk can use this as a shield, blocking attacks against it’s hardened surface. She can only use this move while in “Stain Apron” form. She doesn’t have the strength or will to use this item as a weapon.

Lookin' good. Enjoy.


(07-24-2016, 03:43 AM)Judy Hopps Wrote: Gonna get a few things cleared out here, so I have them approved for whenever I get enough OM to actually use them.


Riot Gear - Alt. Form (2000)

Hopps dons police-grade riot gear, a black and navy suit that's way heavier than her normal uniform. This completely ups her defense, but the bulk of it slows her down quite a bit. Attack power and technique don't change. Super Jumping and Master Acrobat are disabled during the usage of the suit.

ATK: 3
DEF: 4
SPD: 1
TEC: 3

Appearance
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Riot Shield - Requires Physical Strength (600)

While wearing the riot gear, Hopps gains access to a metal shield that is a bit less than the height and width of her own body. That would be a little under two feet tall, and a foot and a half wide. However, with its size, it's impossible to shield anyone else while using it. As an added bonus, she can also use this as a ramming weapon.

Appearance
[spoiler][Image: Riot_Shield_1_Front_400x600__29468.14418...50.jpg?c=2][/spoiler]

Alt form is good to go.

Riot Shield -- Just as a general sort of idea, about how fast and powerful is the shield ram? Given the (relative) size of the thing, I imagine it would pack at least a moderate punch and be correspondingly difficult/cumbersome to wield, but then again it could be otherwise, and such things are good to know for anyone writing with you.


(07-24-2016, 05:15 AM)Kakashi Hatake Wrote: Smoke Bomb (Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency; 300 OM)
[spoiler][Image: latest?cb=20120424072802][/spoiler]

One of the most basic tools of a ninja’s arsenal, these useful items are slightly larger than a golf ball, though weigh about half as much. They are composed of a mixture of various compounds primed with chakra and wrapped in paper. When thrown, they detonate upon contact with anything solid, releasing a plume of smoke (various colors are possible, usually a dull gray or brown) covering an area with a diameter of roughly 3 meters, inflicting a blind and mild respiratory irritation on those contained within (those with Enhanced Senses negate the former effect). The smokescreen persists for about a minute, though those caught within the smoke may simply choose to exit the affected area, suffering no lasting effects. While typically used in close-quarters combat or dropped at the feet of the user, Kakashi can throw these relatively far, able to hit things within around 50 feet of himself accurately. If he throws these while moving, the effective range falls to around 20 feet and while they don’t require concentration, his throws will be much sloppier if he were to be under fire. These can be used with other moves, though anything that requires precision aim such as shuriken will not be as accurate if thrown simultaneously. At any given time he can carry around a half dozen of these on his person due to relatively minimal storage.

Lookin' good. Just one quick detail to ponder over: can he throw more than one at a time? The wording makes it seem like so, and he indeed can, how many at one time?


(07-24-2016, 05:43 AM)Lord Dominator Wrote: [Image: tumblr_inline_nyelhicpHA1se6qej_1280.png]
Magma Cannon
Move OM Cost: 300
Required Proficiencies: Debuff Proficiency (Not yet bought), Ranged Proficiency. 
Required Powers: None
Total cost: 300

The Magma Cannon is a 'classic' weapon in Dominator's arsenal, and one that her armour can summon in about three seconds. It shoots blasts of concentrated Volcanium X, but oddly enough not with the intent to maim or kill. On impact, the magma rapidly hardens into a hard metal whilst simultaneously wrapping around the target and nearby surfaces. If broken, the metal will attempt to reform around the target until it is completely removed or a minute has passed (at which point it hardens for good in whatever state it is in). Characters with strength less than half of Dominator's will find it extremely difficult to break free whilst characters with strength greater than half or equal to Dominator's will usually struggle with it unless they are creative. At higher strength values the binding can easily be broken and shaken away completely in a matter of moments unless the target is already exhausted or badly hurt. 


The magma blasts themselves aren't pleasant (being quite hot) but can't do more than inflict a sunburn-like rash. The cannon can be fired once every five seconds, has a maximum range of approximately 600 feet, and the projectiles themselves travel about as fast as a cannon shot (290 feet/second). However, Dominator is only really accurate with it out to about 100 feet. Any further than that and it is increasingly unlikely she's going to hit what she was aiming at. Due to the concentration required to aim the cannon, Dominator can only move whilst using it if the target she is shooting at is much, much bigger than her. (If she is literally shooting at the broad side of a barn, then she can probably calculate the trajectory whilst moving; otherwise, she is theoretically able to pull the trigger... but has no chance at all of hitting what she's aiming at).

Each blast is about half a foot in diameter, and can spread over a single human-sized target. If she was extremely lucky she might be able to stick two people together (for instance if they were holding hands and she shot their hands) but it isn't a true area attack.

Each shot is also quite draining on Dominator's resources. Whilst she can theoretically keep shooting whilst she has Volcanium X to power the shots, overuse of the Magma Cannon can risk de-powering her armour, leaving her vulnerable to attack.

Snazzy. Good to go.
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