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Official Move Approval IV
(07-15-2016, 01:30 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Z-Tech Wrist Blasters 
Cost: 600 OM 
Requires: Ranged Proficiency . 

This weapon was created by Warren Zimmer. Based off of the Wrist Blasters that he once had,  Warren's made some improvements to the design allowing them to function in this world. The wrist blasters pack a punch enough to concuss an opponent and perhaps knock them off balance. They are also built into both wrists,  so he can either fire a single charged shot... or shoot multiple weak rapid fire shots.  This weapon is something that cannot be stolen from Warren by anyone. It takes about a second for him to fire each shot.   It is a versatile weapon that is well suited to Warren Zimmer and adds some flair to his techniques. These travel at speeds of 40 MPH when fired from this weapon. The size of the blast  is about the size of a football.  The fact they concuss is because they do very low amounts of damage.  To be clear these don't debuff an opponent but do a pathetic amount of damage to them. This takes roughly 25 seconds to fully charge.  The rate of fire on the weaker ones is about 6 per every 5 seconds. 

These are very accurate.  The range is about 3-5 feet from him.   This can be used with other moves so long as he's using the blast one handed in which case he can forget about charging the move up.  This barely drains him at all and doesn't require much focus. All he does to do it is simply point both arms at an opponent and unleash the energy blasts which takes about 2 seconds to do. 

Z-Tech Energy Blast - Fire:  (300 OM,   Ranged Proficiency.) 

This is a variant of the typical energy blast that is fired from the wrists of his suit.  Unlike the typical energy blasts this possesses an elemental property namely that of the Element of Fire,  itself.   This technique is one of the ones Warren has come up to allow himself to defend himself in the new world he is in. 

The Z-Tech Fire Energy Blast is colored a mix of purple and reddish flames,  giving it an eerie and almost evil feel to the color of the fire he's shooting.  The fire blasts are about the size of a fist... each. They travel at relatively quick speeds of 40 MPH.The size of the blast  is about the size of a football.  The range is about 3-5 feet from him. While this requires about 20 seconds to charge up only one of these can be fired at a time. Creating the blast does in fact require his concentration,  and that means he can't use other moves while doing this.  These are pin point accurate and made so they can do precision attacks on the opponent. 

The fire doesn't explode nor does it debuff in any way,  shape or form. 


Wrist Blasters: So these fire 6 at a time? And if it's not a debuff, is the concussive effect just like a split-second disorient effect or something then?

Fire Blasts: About how damaging are these in general terms? Can they be used while moving or does aiming require him to stand still? How draining is this on his stamina?


(07-15-2016, 04:36 PM)Carmelita Wrote: Definitely an assist. I'd want the effect to be longer than that necessitated by a super move. Originally it was going to be Def 5 but I had forgotten the inability for a tier 1 assist to have more than 2 in a stat...

If the shield is infeasible at this Def level, let me know and I'll save it for the tier 2 assist, and make a weaker prototype mech for the tier 1 assist.

For the hardiness you'd want, I'd advise getting a Tier-2. With a Tier-1 you'd get a much weaker shield that probably couldn't sustain a ton of damage without breaking and needing to be re-summoned.

(07-16-2016, 01:04 AM)Lord Dominator Wrote: Lava Gauntlets
Move OM Cost: 300
Required Proficiencies: Physical Strength (1000) 
Required Powers: None
Total cost: 1300

Lord Dominator can cause her gloves (or armoured gauntlets in armour mode) to become burning hot lava. This is a fairly standard attack power which takes little effort to maintain and modestly increases the damage that she is able to inflict with her fists. It takes three seconds to imbue her hands with lava. Whilst her hands are covered in lava, she is incapable of fine dexterity (such as typing on a computer, tying a knot or shuffling a deck of cards) and she can't choose NOT to burn things she touches - so passing someone a sandwich or grabbing a rope would be right out. The exception to that rule is her own armour, which is immune to the lava it generates. (If someone deflected a punch into herself, though, it would still hurt due to the momentum - just not the lava)

Can this be used while moving? How draining is this to maintain or how long does it last? Does the lava inflict any debuffs like debilitating burns or anything? Can this be used with other moves?  

Also, you wouldn't need to buy the proficiency again since you already have it. The move would just be 300.

(07-16-2016, 05:57 AM)Yuuka Kazami Wrote: 300 OM - Parasol (Requires Physical Strength)

Yuuka's parasol, in addition to being able to fire bullets for her other moves, can feasibly be used as a bludgeoning weapon as well. While not supernaturally sturdy, it is a fair bit moreso than your average parasol only used for blocking the sun. Think something similar to a golf club in sturdiness, like it was made to take abuse. It's about two and a half feet long, pale pink in color, and far more effective at hitting people when closed than open. Usually she uses it in a blunt force trauma way, but technically she could also impale someone with the metal tip of it if she used enough force. Both of these damage methods feel equivalent to what they logically should feel like as being smacked or stabbed by a hard metal pole, taking into account the user's attack and target's defense.

Since she always has it in hand, her windup time before using it simply depends on her reaction time to what's going on around her. (So, not exactly lightning quick.) Naturally, it's a bit heavier than most parasols, but Yuuka herself doesn't even seem to notice this. She can get a bit winded after repeated use of it. However, Yuuka also gets winded walking at anything faster than three miles an hour, so this isn't exactly surprising and owes more to her low endurance than the attack itself.

Opened, it's very good at cutting UV rays and a nice way to avoid sunburn when in the garden. It also smells nice, much like many of Yuuka's things.

Looks great. Approved!
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