07-13-2016, 10:13 PM
Krona's Gauntlet: Is this just a 0 OM move that's explaining how the other moves stem from it? It's currently reading like it's own move, but has no price listed, so I thought I'd ask. The lesser construct part specifically will need to be explained somewhat, since as you list them as being able to be used in combat it seems to be separate from your Construct Creation fodder move.
Cannon: Can you describe the size of the cannon? What's the size of the beam? How fast does the beam travel? What's the range? Does this take concentration to maintain? How draining is this on Hal? Does the cannon need to be re-summoned for every use or does it persist? Can it be broken? Is this usable with other moves?
Plasma Burst: What's the size of the blast? Exactly how damaging is it? Leaving it as 'unknown' isn't gonna fly. How fast does the blast move? What's the range? Can this be used while moving? Does it require concentration to charge? How draining is this on Hal? Can it be used with other moves
Cannon: Can you describe the size of the cannon? What's the size of the beam? How fast does the beam travel? What's the range? Does this take concentration to maintain? How draining is this on Hal? Does the cannon need to be re-summoned for every use or does it persist? Can it be broken? Is this usable with other moves?
Plasma Burst: What's the size of the blast? Exactly how damaging is it? Leaving it as 'unknown' isn't gonna fly. How fast does the blast move? What's the range? Can this be used while moving? Does it require concentration to charge? How draining is this on Hal? Can it be used with other moves
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