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Character Change: Agnès Oblige to Joline
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You're history is a little vague, but you're playing an amnesiac with a boring life previous the Omniverse so I can let that slide. However, I would like it if you were to be more clear on the moments before being taken.

Brug Hild: This move it pretty good, though if I were to nitpick: you specify the length of the blade but not the width.

Beskyttende: Look good!

Stradi-Various: Pretty good, no problems here.

Pretty good so far! Just change those little things and I'll get onto the paperwork.
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