06-22-2016, 02:35 PM
Hello there, and welcome to the Omniverse. Let's have us a look-see here and get you on your way to the approval process.
Right, so as things stand, your current OM expenditure is more than the 5000 you get to start with. Since such things are easy to miss (I math wrong all the time), let's have a breakdown of spending right quick:
-- Ranged Proficiency (1000)
-- Buff Proficiency (400)
-- Master Acrobat (400)
-- Healing (2500)
-- Moves, as they stand (600)
-- 11th stat point (1000)
All total: 5900
Should be an easy enough thing to fix. Take off an extra stat point somewhere, or cut back on something like Healing -- it's an expensive power.
That aside, let's move on to your Moves here.
Invigored with Hope!: Generally speaking, regular moves can't actually boost stats of other characters -- especially not multiple ones -- without some pretty serious downsides. You could provide a minor boost to allies, but it wouldn't actually boost numerical stat values. More specifics necessary, regardless, along the following lines:
-- How close is 'nearby' in this instance? A few feet, few meters?
-- How long does it take to prep the move and activate it?
-- How long does it last once activated, since one post could be only a few seconds or several minutes with the way time can work in combat situations?
-- How many allies can be under this effect at once? Does said effect grow stronger/weaker with less/more under its effect?
Feel the power of Hope!: Fairly basic move, all in all. Just a few clarifications, though...
-- You mention its both stronger than a basic blast, but weak compared to other blasts of its rank. Clarify?
-- What's the effective range on this?
-- How quickly can you fire this, or, what's the rate of fire?
-- What's the speed of the blast once it's fired? Thrown projectile? Arrow? Bullet? Even faster?
And as a general note for the future, make sure to note what sort pf powers/proficiencies are required for a move, and how much the move costs -- or how much you believe it to cost.
Right, so as things stand, your current OM expenditure is more than the 5000 you get to start with. Since such things are easy to miss (I math wrong all the time), let's have a breakdown of spending right quick:
-- Ranged Proficiency (1000)
-- Buff Proficiency (400)
-- Master Acrobat (400)
-- Healing (2500)
-- Moves, as they stand (600)
-- 11th stat point (1000)
All total: 5900
Should be an easy enough thing to fix. Take off an extra stat point somewhere, or cut back on something like Healing -- it's an expensive power.
That aside, let's move on to your Moves here.
Invigored with Hope!: Generally speaking, regular moves can't actually boost stats of other characters -- especially not multiple ones -- without some pretty serious downsides. You could provide a minor boost to allies, but it wouldn't actually boost numerical stat values. More specifics necessary, regardless, along the following lines:
-- How close is 'nearby' in this instance? A few feet, few meters?
-- How long does it take to prep the move and activate it?
-- How long does it last once activated, since one post could be only a few seconds or several minutes with the way time can work in combat situations?
-- How many allies can be under this effect at once? Does said effect grow stronger/weaker with less/more under its effect?
Feel the power of Hope!: Fairly basic move, all in all. Just a few clarifications, though...
-- You mention its both stronger than a basic blast, but weak compared to other blasts of its rank. Clarify?
-- What's the effective range on this?
-- How quickly can you fire this, or, what's the rate of fire?
-- What's the speed of the blast once it's fired? Thrown projectile? Arrow? Bullet? Even faster?
And as a general note for the future, make sure to note what sort pf powers/proficiencies are required for a move, and how much the move costs -- or how much you believe it to cost.
If you see me around and you got questions, just give a shout. I'm happy to assist.
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