Official Move Approval IV

[Mark]

Zio - Ranged Proficiency - 300 OM

A simple offensive spell that creates a two meters long lightning bolt in the caster's grasping hand. The bolt travels faster than conventional arrows and delivers a powerful shock, but is incapable of stunning. Has a casting time of three seconds, and is incredibly accurate only to the forty meter mark, becoming unreliable at longer distances. Casting the spell once requires minimal effort, but extensive use can lead to fatigue. Needs very little concentration and can be used while moving or alongside other moves.


Dia - Healing - 300 OM

A simple single target recovery spell that envelopes its target in a healing light, patching up minor injuries and momentarily dulling the feelings of pain and fatigue. The closer a target is, the less the effort needed to heal them, to a maximum range of forty meters. Can be applied to both moving and stationary targets. Has a casting time of three seconds, during which the caster can move around, but not activate other spells. The energy requirement is such that repeated castings can cause extreme exhaustion, but is tolerable when used sparingly.

How's this?

Dia looks good, but if you want to heal at range you'll need Ranged Proficiency and Homing Proficiency. Also, you might already know this as it's mentioned in the description of Healing, but for full disclosure, the 'minorness' of the healing would be like closing cuts and stuff, and not actually healing HP damage. With that added, it's approved.

You'll need to rebalance Zio. As it stands it travels quite fast and deals a large amount of damage with a decently large range and minimal concentration or stamina drain. Also, what is the rough area of the 'head' of the lightning bolt? Like an arrowhead size, or something larger?

Retry:

Tier 1 Super Move: Shield Beam - 600 OM  (Requires Area Shield Proficiency)


Description:

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By using either a punch or kick, Gin shoots a beam created by his shield powers straight at his foe. 

Appearance:

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• Three feet in diameter.
  
• The beam is the same color as his shields, and has the shape of a shield at the end of the beam. 
  

Stats:

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• Moves at 30 feet per second (20mph / 32kph).
  
• In terms of strength, think of it as being hit by a semi that got thrown at you.
  
• Cast Speed is FIVE seconds.
  
• Range is 240ft (73 meters).
  
• Gin is partially exhausted and is rendered unable to use his powers for 1 Turn.
  

Details look good. You'd need Ranged Proficiency rather than Shield, though. Sorry, I didn't realize that you didn't already have that. With that detail noted, it's approved.