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Official Move Approval IV
(06-10-2016, 09:12 AM)Makoto Yuki Wrote: Claymore - Physical Strength - 300 OM

A two handed sword nearly one and a half meters in length. Slightly emphasizes power over speed, and can be one handed in a pinch. The weapon is summoned by Makoto from an immaterial plane of thought, and can be dismissed to and retrieved from that plane at a moment's notice.


Zio - Ranged Proficiency - 300 OM

Makoto focuses his will to create a lightning bolt in his hand, when thrown it travels faster than conventional arrows and delivers a nasty shock to opponents. Has a casting time of three seconds, and is extremely accurate only to the forty meter mark, becoming unreliable at longer distances. Can be used while moving around, but its accuracy decreases accordingly.


Dia - Healing - 300 OM

A simple recovery spell that can only heal one target at a time. Makoto focuses his mind for three seconds before enveloping himself or one ally with a wave of healing light that patches up minor injuries, and momentarily dulls the feelings of pain and fatigue. The closer a target is, the less the effort needed to heal them, to a maximum range of forty meters. Demands enough focus to cast that moving around becomes difficult.

I'm not sure if asking this is necessary or not but I'm doing it anyway just to be sure, I'd like to rewrite one of my moves from:

Omnipotent Orb - Tier 1 Super Defensive Move

A magical orb of infinite power, given to him by Elizabeth after battling and defeating her at the top level of the Monad Block, itself the most dangerous block of Tartarus. In his world, the Omnipotent Orb would nullify all physical, magical and elemental damage inflicted on him, with the only exception being damage that's divine in origin. Upon his entrance to the Omniverse however, Omni saw fit to severely limit its effectiveness. Now while it still retains its ability to nullify damage, it currently only possesses one "charge" to be used in battle, giving the user a second or two of unconditional invincibility, effectively blocking one attack of comparable power (Tier 1 Attack). While it's in use, Makoto's body is enveloped by a faint purple aura. Magical and elemental attacks disperse harmlessly upon coming in contact with this envelope, while physical ones lose all momentum and stop suddenly.

To:

Invulnerability - Tier 1 Super Defensive Move

A magical effect granted by an extremely powerful magical artifact. When activated, a purple fog surrounds the user and either nullifies any and all attacks targeting them for a period of two seconds, or serves to cancel one Super Move of the same Tier.

The effect of the move is still the same, but the description makes me less inclined to gouge out my eyes with a rusty spoon. May I?

Bumping!

EDIT: Added some important info that some moves were messing.


Messages In This Thread
Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 07-13-2015, 02:17 PM
Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 08-30-2015, 06:24 PM
Moves PSA - by Omni - 10-30-2015, 05:59 PM

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