06-11-2016, 09:00 PM
Every Day's Great at Your Junes - Why is this 600 OM? You can't actually buff stats without using sp You don't need to make it so that she has to say the jingle more than once. I need you to put a time limit on the buff. Rather than saying 'boosting the atk and def stats' you should say something like 'temporarily making them stronger and more resistant in battle'.
Dancing All Night - Again, why is this 600 OM? You can't directly effect stats with a buff or debuff and, typically, debuffs are things that hinder or do additional damage without your character actually having control over the move after using it (like wrapping someone in vines or freezing them to the ground). I also don't really see how this move would actually effect someone in any sort of way, let alone a debuffing way. (I think this move needs to be re-thought.)
Tickle Monster - Can you explain what you mean by 'When they react' ? is it when they laugh? or try to stop her from tickling them?
If you need any help with your moves, there's the move creation workshop thread, and/ or the moves guide thread.
Dancing All Night - Again, why is this 600 OM? You can't directly effect stats with a buff or debuff and, typically, debuffs are things that hinder or do additional damage without your character actually having control over the move after using it (like wrapping someone in vines or freezing them to the ground). I also don't really see how this move would actually effect someone in any sort of way, let alone a debuffing way. (I think this move needs to be re-thought.)
Tickle Monster - Can you explain what you mean by 'When they react' ? is it when they laugh? or try to stop her from tickling them?
If you need any help with your moves, there's the move creation workshop thread, and/ or the moves guide thread.