Official Move Approval IV

[Mark]

I never said the move isn't viable, I'm just asking for more information. Every question I've asked of you is in the first 2 or 3 posts of this topic that describe how to write a move. I can't speak to a move that I didn't approve, because obviously I wasn't involved in that decision. I'm literally just running down a checklist to make sure everything is square. The only reason I put that bit about using it on secondaries is because you said that you just wanted to use it on secondaries. That was not me in any way saying you can't have the move.

The version of the move you had was very nearly done. I just need to know if it requires concentration and if it stuns. If it doesn't require concentration, you can just say no. If it stuns, I need to know for how long and you'll need Debuff Proficiency to purchase it. If the move is weak enough and doesn't stun, you won't need to include additional stamina drain beyond what your already wrote. If it stuns for a long enough length of time though, you'll need more of a downside.

In the future if you're feeling frustrated with how to format a move, please try asking for assistance in the Workshop thread. The last thing I want to do is frustrate you.