Official Move Approval IV

[Tartaros]

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Hunting Chain - Requires Physical Strength and Ranged Proficiency - 300 OM

A reinforced steel chain of around twenty-five feet in length with an attached hook, kept by Tartaros on his mag-lock belt. This cable is designed to be thrown, and to hook into or wrap around targets, allowing the wielder to temporarily trap their mark and pull them with mild damage. However, this chain can be struggled out of, with the time taken for the target to free themselves depending on their ATK compared to the wielder's. The higher the target's ATK, the faster it is to break out.

Can this accurately hit moving targets? Does it require Rusthobo to be standing still to hit people? Can this be used with other moves? Can the chain be resummoned in-battle if broken? If so, how long does it take and would that require significant concentration?

Hunting Chain - Requires Physical Strength and Ranged Proficiency - 300 OM

A reinforced steel chain of around twenty-five feet in length with an attached hook, kept by Tartaros on his mag-lock belt. This chain is designed to be thrown with the off hand and to hook into or wrap around fast-moving targets, allowing the wielder to temporarily trap their mark and pull them forward, before going in for the kill with a proper attack. 

However, it is significantly more difficult to land a hit with this attack while moving than while still, and the chain can be struggled out of, with the time taken for the target to free themselves depending on their ATK compared to the wielder's. The higher the target's ATK, the faster it is to break out. The chain can be re-summoned after around five seconds of careful concentration if broken. 


Does this look any better?

Looks good. Just wondering whether this can be used with other moves or not and if so, which. Also, does the difficult to land a hit bit apply to both Tart throwing while moving and Tart trying to hit someone moving? Just making sure.


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Hunting Chain - Requires Physical Strength and Ranged Proficiency - 300 OM

A reinforced steel chain of around twenty-five feet in length with an attached hook, kept by Tartaros on his mag-lock belt. This chain is designed to be thrown with the off hand and to hook into or wrap around fast-moving targets, allowing the wielder to temporarily trap their mark and pull them forward, before going in for the kill with a proper attack. 

However, it is significantly more difficult to land a hit with this attack while moving than while still for the wielder, and the chain can be struggled out of, with the time taken for the target to free themselves depending on their ATK compared to the wielder's. The higher the target's ATK, the faster it is to break out. The chain can be re-summoned after around five seconds of careful concentration if broken. 

Edited slightly, also, note the italics.