Official Move Approval IV

[Mark]

Close Range Shooter [Ranged Proficiency, 300 OM]

The Close Range Shooter is a 9mm pistol that resembles a Glock. Its holster is on Kalli's right thigh, the gun itself summoned before battle. Every bullet is that of a typical modern round, though it's only as strong as Kalli's ATK stat allows it to be. Kalli can equip this weapon quickly, the pistol itself may be shot using both hands or only one hand. The magazines for the pistol hold eight rounds each, the pouches containing these magazines are attached to Kalli's belt. The pistol is semi-automatic, so it may be fired as fast as the wielder can pull the trigger before running out of bullets. While on the move (such as running, sliding, jumping, etc.) the pistol may also be drawn and used, though it becomes rather inaccurate and hard to hit targets while moving. It also loses accuracy when shooting from one hand, or the further the target is from the shooter.

What's the range on this? How long does it take to reload?

The Burned Man (Tier Two Transformation, 1500 OM)

ATK: +2
DEF: +2
SPD: +2
TEC: +4

Okor was tempered in the fires of the Ashen Steppes, his bones scorched and left to lie in the ash of that damned realm. The experience has left him somewhat changed, driven to avenge his defeat and to unleash his anger on this false world. As he activates this transformation, his armour blackens and hardens as his flesh burns away, bones that have been twisted by the whims of the gods over millennia all that remains, animated by a vengeful will that has yet to be stayed by death itself. Ten Thousand years of warfare, unbound by the weakness of flesh, returns. Restored to but a fraction of the strength and skill he deserves, Okor strikes at the world that keeps him captive, intending to burn it down to mere cinders.

Approved.

Hunting Chain - Requires Physical Strength and Ranged Proficiency - 300 OM

A reinforced steel chain of around twenty-five feet in length with an attached hook, kept by Tartaros on his mag-lock belt. This cable is designed to be thrown, and to hook into or wrap around targets, allowing the wielder to temporarily trap their mark and pull them with mild damage. However, this chain can be struggled out of, with the time taken for the target to free themselves depending on their ATK compared to the wielder's. The higher the target's ATK, the faster it is to break out.

Can this accurately hit moving targets? Does it require Rusthobo to be standing still to hit people? Can this be used with other moves? Can the chain be resummoned in-battle if broken? If so, how long does it take and would that require significant concentration?

Tier One Super Move- Killing Blow// Marcus takes about 3 seconds to summon the screwdriver which is about  20 inches.  He stabs a person with the screwdriver. He requires a few seconds to focus on creating the screwdriver. After the whole process, it takes marcus a few seconds to recover from the attack.

Approved, just make sure that you put all of the info from the last few posts together when you put it in your roster.

Thunder Quake - 300 - (requires: Area Attack, Physical Strength)
Thor slams his Hammer into the ground, sending lightning shooting out in a 10ft circle with him at its center. The lightning last for 1 second. This move can only be used once every 5 or 10 seconds so that it can pull electricity from the air around it. It does this automatically and it does not effect Thor. (Basically, it's just a cool-down)

How damaging is this? Can it be used while Thor is moving? Is there a wind-up that requires his concentration? Does the lightning stun foes at all? Can this be used with other moves? Regarding the cooldown, you'll need to give some kind of stamina drain to this beyond a cooldown since not being able to use it over a span of time isn't really a downside. A smaller stamina drain would mean less damage, etc.