06-05-2016, 12:07 AM
Killing Blow: How long does it take to summon the screwdriver? Can you describe the size? Is it as simple as stabbing with a screwdriver or does he do anything special to make it deal more damage? Does it require focus to summon the screwdriver? How draining is the whole thing?
Protector: Does this require concentration to cast? What’s the max distance that he can summon the shield from himself? For the stun, a full minute is a very long time. For a move that only has a mild drain on Marcus, you wouldn’t be able to get more than a few seconds with a small amount of damage unless you wanted to rebalance the move. This version of the move is also missing some of the details from the last write-up, so you might consider combining the two paragraphs somehow so that all the needed info is there.
Protector: Does this require concentration to cast? What’s the max distance that he can summon the shield from himself? For the stun, a full minute is a very long time. For a move that only has a mild drain on Marcus, you wouldn’t be able to get more than a few seconds with a small amount of damage unless you wanted to rebalance the move. This version of the move is also missing some of the details from the last write-up, so you might consider combining the two paragraphs somehow so that all the needed info is there.
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