Official Move Approval IV

[Mark]

Protector- ( Killer punch, Area Shield Proficiency ) An 10 ft circle electrical shield that allows Marcus to stop projectiles from a distance to up to 10 feet. Marcus can use it to shock those who get too close to his weak spots. The stun can arc across distances. He can use it in motion but he requires a few seconds of concentration for a few seconds. Summoning this electrical shield causes Marcus a few seconds of breathing to start again.
However, the electrical based shield cannot protect from heavy attacks. It takes Marcus 3 seconds to make it appear, and it fades with 10 seconds within taking too many heavy blows.
(600 OM)

Tier 1 Super move- Killing Blow (Killer punch, physical proficiency)

Marcus grabs the enemy in question, and summons with OM, a copy within anything in reach and proceeds to either stab or slam the enemy in question.

Protector: by “from a distance to up to 10 feet”, do you mean he projects the shield 10 feet away from him? If so, you'll need Ranged Materialize. Does the sheild follow Marcus or does it stay in place when he moves? What is the distance from the shield that the stun can reach? How long is the foe stunned? How damaging is the shock? After the few seconds post-cast, how draining would this be on his stamina overall (mild, moderate, heavy)? Can he use this with other moves?

Killing Blow: I'm not really understanding what this entails. What is he summoning? Try taking a look at the list on the first page and flesh the move out a little more.