05-29-2016, 03:35 AM
(05-28-2016, 09:26 PM)Mark Wrote:(05-27-2016, 05:36 PM)Caira Ayryn Wrote:(05-06-2016, 02:30 PM)Caira Ayryn Caira Ayryn Wrote: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...0#pid71240 Submitting the Stars quest, I believe I have finished the first option to its standards, but I have to note I left the ending a little ambiguous so that my NPC astronomer could decide her fate, (thats you guys!) as well as may have mixed up the order of a few of the requirements?, I hope that is acceptable, if not, that's okay too. Pending the verdict, "pass or fail" Marty the astronomer will say different things (or you could have him say the things).
I did mention a little of the backstory in it, and I hope that was not breaking any unestablished rule, if not I will gladly change it.
The word count was round (I edited the ending for the reason above) 17.5 k
Just bumping this to check the progress of it, 3 weeks doesn't seem like anytime at all!
Sorry this took so long!
Since you tweaked the story a bit, we'll just need a bit more from you. You'll just need to have Caira meet with the Astronomers' Guild and have Marty convince them to trust you. From there they can share their info with Caira and you'll have completed the quest.
BAM! http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...7#pid73117
Caira made a speech with Marty's backing. It was effective!