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Official Move Approval IV
(05-27-2016, 01:56 PM)Marcus Wright Wrote: Protector- (Debuff,) A electrical shield that allows Marcus to protect himself from data attacks or real attacks. Marcus can use it to shock those who get too close to his weak spots.
However, the electrical based shield cannot protect from heavy attacks. It takes Marcus 3 seconds to make it appear, and it fades with 10 seconds within taking too many heavy blows.
(300 OM)
  • What is the size and shape of this? Not sure what exactly you mean by 'data or real', try to describe it as generally as possible (e.g. 'stops projectiles' or 'absorbs physical strikes')
  • You'll need to change the cost to 600 if you want both the defending and stunning effect
  • What is the range on the stun? Direct contact, or can it arc across distances?
  • Can this be used in motion, or must he stand still?
  • Does casting or maintaining require concentration?
  • How draining is this to summon?
  • Can you elaborate on the debuff? What's the duration (generally speaking)? Does it do damage as well as debuff? Does it inflict a stun, or something else?
  • Can this be used with other moves?

(05-27-2016, 02:08 PM)Diamond655 Wrote: Altered Overclock a bit, this should be better.

Overclock - Tier 1 Super Attack(600 OM)

Mick opens up a small, hard-to-see compartment on the Heat Gun and places a strange, glowing orange orb inside(referred to as the Overclock Cell), then closes the compartment again. The Heat Gun lets out a mechanical "whine" noise. Mick then places the aim on the opponent and holds down the trigger. The Heat Gun charges power for 10 seconds, then unleashes a powerful beam of pure heat energy. Visually, the beam doesn't even look like a beam of fire anymore - it looks like an orange beam of pure energy. The beam is 1 yard all around, and reaches 10 meters, making it similar in beam size and range to the normal Heat Gun.

Mick has to stand still while firing this. The blast is fired continuously for 5 seconds, afterwards the Overclock Cell is automatically ejected, and cannot be re-used.

Approved.
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