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Move Creation Workshop
He's replacing this:
Quote:A mysterious torch that helps Clownpiece drive people to madness. It’s made of wood, and is about 2.5 feet long. Rather than a burning flame, the end of the torch glows with an ethereal purple light. If worst comes to worst, she can smack someone with it, but the light doesn’t burn, and the torch is only a wooden rod, making that a fairly ineffective maneuver. Rather, the torch’s main purpose is to mess with the sanity of those who look at the glow.

With this:
(02-11-2018, 12:58 AM)Clownpiece Wrote: A mysterious torch that helps Clownpiece drive people to madness. It’s made of wood and is about 2.5 feet long. Rather than a burning flame, the end of the torch glows with an ethereal purple light. If worst comes to worst, she can smack someone with it, but the light doesn’t burn, and since the torch is just a light, wooden rod, this is a very ineffective maneuver. Fortunately, hitting someone does more than just hurt them. Since the torch is imbued with the power of madness, a strike from it scrambles her enemy’s mind, preventing the formation of memories for 10 seconds, no matter where she hits. To the afflicted, it suddenly feels like they skipped ahead 10 seconds, though they were fighting all through that duration. 
Aside from that, the torch’s main purpose is to mess with the sanity of those who look at the glow.


@Dane - Personally, I'd say he already did what you said about making it obvious that it's low damage (changing 'fairly ineffective' to 'very ineffective')... though maybe switching the word 'ineffective' for 'weak' would make it even more blatantly apparent, if you really feel that's necessary.
@CP - I'd recommend including the part I quoted from your roster when you put this in for approval, to let the staff know what exactly it is that you're changing and so avoid confusion.
Dane's right about the Fatigue bit, though. You got away without saying that the first time because it was just a stick, so it was obvious to anyone who read it that it was about as tiring to swing as a normal stick... because this includes an additional effect, you'll need to make it clearer how much energy it costs.
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Move Creation Workshop - by Omni - 07-25-2015, 03:25 AM
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