05-10-2016, 12:21 PM
History: At what point specifically was Ara taken to the Omniverse?
Your moves are a bit on the confusing side. Firstly, you'd need a separate move for the Spear you describe in your moves. Be sure to describe it to the best of your ability, including dimensions and anything special about it. The others seem like they could either be reworked or taken out entirely.
Tempest Dance and Dragon Stance 4: Both of these you wouldn't need to pay extra OM for after purchasing the Spear, as maneuvers like this are just how you swing the spear. If you want you can make the charged from of Dragon Stance into a separate move and just describe it as being a version of the normal movement, just charged with energy or what have you.
Dragon Stance 3: So is this a two-palm strike that consists of a strong thrust and then a knockback, or are there more strikes involved? Is there a charge time for this? How draining is it to use? Is there any debilitating effect beyond being knocked backward?
Lastly, Power-Ups aren't available until you reach 7000 OM. Also, as an FYI when you want to get this approved in the future, be sure to include a description.
Your moves are a bit on the confusing side. Firstly, you'd need a separate move for the Spear you describe in your moves. Be sure to describe it to the best of your ability, including dimensions and anything special about it. The others seem like they could either be reworked or taken out entirely.
Tempest Dance and Dragon Stance 4: Both of these you wouldn't need to pay extra OM for after purchasing the Spear, as maneuvers like this are just how you swing the spear. If you want you can make the charged from of Dragon Stance into a separate move and just describe it as being a version of the normal movement, just charged with energy or what have you.
Dragon Stance 3: So is this a two-palm strike that consists of a strong thrust and then a knockback, or are there more strikes involved? Is there a charge time for this? How draining is it to use? Is there any debilitating effect beyond being knocked backward?
Lastly, Power-Ups aren't available until you reach 7000 OM. Also, as an FYI when you want to get this approved in the future, be sure to include a description.
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