Move Creation Workshop

[Jade Harley]

Sea Shield (900) – Requires Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Homing Proficiency (Remote Control?)

Yeah! Sounds good to me.

Explosive Cannon Arm  (300,  Ranged Proficiency.) 
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Foot Ball is a Game that Warren has a lot of experience as the "Quarterback of Chaos"  playing.   Due to this he has developed this technique to channel part of his talents of Football into actual combat situations.  Using the power of Omnilium he will 'materialize'  10 foot balls made out of dark energy that actually contain a secret.  For you see these are not your every day pigskins... but are actually more than that.  There is a surprise hidden inside each and every one of them... namely that they can and will explode damaging everything within 3 feet.  However the explosion is not triggered until they are lobbed at an opponent or thrown like a regular foot ball... or kicked at an opponent.   This move involves him picking up the foot balls,  and hurling them at an enemy.  The Dark Foot Balls are colored black and purple and appear to be made entirely out of energy,  but look like regular footballs otherwise.

Change "10 foot balls" to just 1 football. Summoning one football at a time works better for designing a move! Also, how long does it take for Warren to materialize a single football? (I recommend a 3 or 5 second summoning time.) Does the strength of the attack decrease over a longer distance? What does it feel like to get hit by one of these footballs? This move also needs a downside, like slight fatigue from kicking or throwing.

Tempest Kick (600,  Ranged Proficiency. Debuff proficiency?) 
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Foot Ball is a Game that Warren has a lot of experience as the "Quarterback of Chaos"  playing.   Due to this he has developed this technique to channel part of his talents of Football into actual combat situations.  Using the power of Omnilium he will materialize a foot ball that appears to be made to appear like a blue sky, with just a hint of blackness in it.   When this is kicked towards an opponent it releases a 'mini tornado' that takes an opponent into the air and makes attacking Warren much harder unless they can actually fly.

Again, how long does it take to materialize this football? The tornado wouldn't last for the entire fight, just so you know; I would recommend rewriting this so that the tornado appears for [x] amount of seconds, throws Warren's opponent into the air [Specify the height that they are thrown into the air!], and then dissipates. Then the opponent is injured when they hit the ground again, which is where the actual damage takes place. That gives the move only a single function, reducing the price to 300 OM.

Maybe change the part that I have outlined in bold to "and the suddenness of the attack makes it more difficult for them to land without taking any damage". This move also still needs a downside, like fatigue!