05-06-2016, 02:30 PM
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...0#pid71240 Submitting the Stars quest, I believe I have finished the first option to its standards, but I have to note I left the ending a little ambiguous so that my NPC astronomer could decide her fate, (thats you guys!) as well as may have mixed up the order of a few of the requirements?, I hope that is acceptable, if not, that's okay too. Pending the verdict, "pass or fail" Marty the astronomer will say different things (or you could have him say the things).
I did mention a little of the backstory in it, and I hope that was not breaking any unestablished rule, if not I will gladly change it.
The word count was round (I edited the ending for the reason above) 17.5 k
I did mention a little of the backstory in it, and I hope that was not breaking any unestablished rule, if not I will gladly change it.
The word count was round (I edited the ending for the reason above) 17.5 k

