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Move Creation Workshop
(05-05-2016, 10:43 PM)Jade Harley Wrote: Homing proficiency would be needed (since it doesn't need to be aimed beyond the initial toss, bouncing between targets like that), Area Attack proficiency may also be required if the shield's targets are spread out far enough. You can always specify that the shield can only attack those opponents within a certain range (narrower than three feet in diameter without Area Attack) of Matrix. The price of 900 OM should account for all of its functions.

"he can summon it to whichever hand he desires from a short range" - If the shield can be summoned further than five feet from Matrix, then you will need the Ranged Materialize proficiency. In short, please specify what a short range is! Otherwise I think this move is pretty solid.

Thanks so much for the advice, Jade! Had not considered Area Attack, but I'll add that, because I definitely want it to be able to bounce more than three feet. Also, "summon" was poor wording on my part, given the setting. He could only materialize it onto either forearm, but if it were dropped he could make it come back to his arm as if magnetized, same as he can with his gun. However, with his gun it's only been to transition it between his holster and his hand, thus far. Telekinesis is Matrix's future, likely before this move now, so that ought to cover that, since Remote Control is included? Here's the revised version, unsure about the ranges.

Sea Shield (900) – Requires Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Homing Proficiency (Remote Control?)

The Sea Shield takes the shape of a circular sea shell, measuring approximately 2.5 feet in diameter. When AndrAIa was younger, she wore the gigantic sea shell as a breastplate, but discarded it as she grew older. Matrix then adopted the shell as an offensive weapon as he matured, utilizing it as an offensive weapon, instead. He can utilize the shield with either hand. Though he summons it from thin air onto either arm, like Gun, he can bring the weapon to either hand without actually making physical contact with it if it is dropped, up to a range of ten feet. It can be used as an offensive weapon, affixed to either of Matrix’s forearms for powerful striking. Likewise, Matrix can hold the shield up and use it to take the brunt of an attack, utilizing its original purpose. Lastly, Matrix is capable of throwing the shield and skillfully bouncing it between targets, making it an effective ranged attack, as well. He can manually throw it with great velocity, slightly faster than an arrow shot from a bow. If it bounces between targets, it only has the velocity to travel seven yards between strikes, and a maximum of three bounces.


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