05-05-2016, 01:26 PM
So saying something like:
"this grants his allies, for the next half minute, something akin Foresight in that it provides them a brief warning of oncoming attacks as well as opportunity to better aim their own."
Rather than this:
"this grants his allies, for the next half minute, Foresight, though only in that it grants them an extra second to avoid attacks or adjust their attacks."
would be acceptable?
"this grants his allies, for the next half minute, something akin Foresight in that it provides them a brief warning of oncoming attacks as well as opportunity to better aim their own."
Rather than this:
"this grants his allies, for the next half minute, Foresight, though only in that it grants them an extra second to avoid attacks or adjust their attacks."
would be acceptable?