05-04-2016, 10:20 AM
Shock pistol - Moves can't be more or less effective against things, this is to avoid the creatuion of character/ moves that would completely negate another character. That being said, you could write the debuff on this move as just effecting someone's senses (in a blanket way, rather than just telepathy, it would effect all of their senses).
You need to describe what the actual weapon looks like. Can you chose to use the debuff on this move or does it always effect people this way? Does it stack with each hit? what is the duration of the debuff?
By 'rasonable velocity' what do you mean? A standard arrow? A bullet? etc.
The Jig is Up - This is just using these two in conjunction with each other, on top of that, I'm going to say that we don't allow moves that just allow you to, 100%, escape a fight. Escaping a fight (PvP) is dependent on many factors and there is no guarantee on an escape, so I'm going to deny this move.
Edit - Did you want your name changed to something shorter?
You need to describe what the actual weapon looks like. Can you chose to use the debuff on this move or does it always effect people this way? Does it stack with each hit? what is the duration of the debuff?
By 'rasonable velocity' what do you mean? A standard arrow? A bullet? etc.
The Jig is Up - This is just using these two in conjunction with each other, on top of that, I'm going to say that we don't allow moves that just allow you to, 100%, escape a fight. Escaping a fight (PvP) is dependent on many factors and there is no guarantee on an escape, so I'm going to deny this move.
Edit - Did you want your name changed to something shorter?

