05-02-2016, 11:18 AM
History: so Chara is basically an alter ego of Frisk that gained freedom when they used up too many timelines? If so I'd explicitly state that since it's not immediately obvious if you haven't played Undertale. And when exactly was Chara pulled to the Omniverse? At the end of the fight with Flowey and Sans? Gotta be exact with this part.
The Real Knife: These changes look good.
Glitching: If you are planning to use this to evade a Move, you should put that into the description. Dodging Moves would also be more draining than regular movement or dodging a punch. And in case it isn't obvious you wouldn't be able to avoid Super Moves unless you got an equal-tier Super Move form of Glitching.
And I just noticed that adding in the extra use of Real Knife actually puts you over (5300) for your available OM (5000). You'll have to cut something out for now.
In the future if you make an edit for something like this, please bump it when you post the edit. We don't get notifications or anything when you edit so otherwise it will just sit here until you let us know.
The Real Knife: These changes look good.
Glitching: If you are planning to use this to evade a Move, you should put that into the description. Dodging Moves would also be more draining than regular movement or dodging a punch. And in case it isn't obvious you wouldn't be able to avoid Super Moves unless you got an equal-tier Super Move form of Glitching.
And I just noticed that adding in the extra use of Real Knife actually puts you over (5300) for your available OM (5000). You'll have to cut something out for now.
In the future if you make an edit for something like this, please bump it when you post the edit. We don't get notifications or anything when you edit so otherwise it will just sit here until you let us know.
Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies
Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.
Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights

