04-28-2016, 10:20 PM
(04-28-2016, 09:57 PM)Jade Harley Wrote:(04-28-2016, 09:16 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Palm Blast: (300):
Holding out the palms of his hands, Warren will gather a blackish purplish energy and then shoot it as beams from his palms of his hands. When the beam hits it would hurt like nobody's business. The Palm Blast would also do a fair amount of damage. The move is one that Warren will pick up on his way to Camelot. The Palm Blast is based off of an ability Warren once had. These beams are about double an arm in width and length. The single beam that it can shoot which is relatively low powered is about as fast as if someone were to throw a foot ball and aim for the head of an individual. The charge time is about 5 seconds with a recharge time of 20 seconds. A single beam can be shot per time before it must recharge.
Having a strong beam and a weak beam makes the move variable, so this move would be priced at 600 OM. On a side note, without the Area Attack proficiency, they can only strike within three feet in diameter.
I would suggest bumping the single weak beam's firing rate/charge time down to just 1 or 2 seconds. The stronger beam is fine!
The recharge time of 5 minutes is super high and there isn't a need for it when you already have the other charge times for the beams. I do not think it needs to be included in the move description because of this.
How fast are these beams? Do they fly as fast as a bullet, an arrow, a pitched baseball, etc?
I believe I've edited the version above to hopefully be acceptable.