04-23-2016, 05:00 PM
I noticed that you added information for Len and Jules, which definitely helps set up future installments. I think that this is a really good read! It sets up the premise well, tells us a but about each character, and helps leave our minds open as to the kinds of things we can expect from the next parts. I certainly look forward to reading more of the Fegensulans!
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