Official Move Approval IV

[Clownpiece]

 Violent Updraft (Area, Debuff, Advanced Super Jumping) (300): Somerled vaults into the air as high as he can, up to 30 meters, with a powerful, uplifting burst of wind. The vicious gust drags anyone within a 5 meter radius into the sky with him. Those immediately next to him are tossed as high as he jumps, and the further away someone is while staying within the effective range, the lower they are launched, down to a mere fraction of the height of his jump at 5 meters. While the wind can't outright harm anyone, the large height that the victim is dropped from does, and the tumultuous air prevents people from righting themselves, rendering even those who know how to fly vulnerable to it. Those who are skilled enough can stop their tumbling, though without a method to safely land, it won't make the inevitable crash any softer.
It's a very intense attack that can wear Somerled out quickly if he's not careful. He needs to concentrate for about two seconds, channeling the wind in preparation, if he's to jump safely. Otherwise, he can cast it much faster, in around a second or less, but then he is also tossed around by the turbulence.

So is this good to go?
Would I need to upgrade the move if I were to upgrade from Advanced to Master super jumping?