04-05-2016, 10:01 PM
(04-05-2016, 09:34 PM)Somerled Murdoch Wrote:(04-05-2016, 08:07 PM)Ballad Wrote: https://soundcloud.com/erpent453/a-shadow-of-a-man
Really sounds like you have a direction in mind and an idea of how to get there. I like it!
There was some noticeable dissonance around :14, and it felt a little bit awkward around late :40-:50. Though those might have been intentional, I'm not a mind-reader
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I'll admit, I'm a bit iffy about the last few seconds myself. I was trying to make it end with all of the instruments playing at the same time after a pause, but I think I made them play it for far too long. That, or the rest was too long.
The dissonance was also the result of me adding a flat to the organ and playing a G on the violin, which produced an odd sound that obviously didn't sound very good. I'll probs fix it when I extend it.


