Official Move Approval III

[Dr. McNinja]

Moon Laser - looks good to me, you don't need range materialize since it targets yourself. Though I will say as a personal note, I think you might not want to make it so difficult to target because that seems like it would be a bitch to write, especially versus speedy characters. APPROVED (unless you want to alter it)

What if I made the attack radius larger? Also, the idea is I pin them down or distract them in some way. But I do want to keep in the spirit of the Moon Laser from the comics, in that it's basically the Death Star laser, while keeping in spirit of the Omniverse. So.... bigger lazarz?

I'll buy it as it is now?

ALSO another one, for later.

Stethoscope Bolas (Requires Ranged, Debuff) - 600 OM

Doc whips forth his stethoscope and chucks it at a target, binding them in a rubbery knot. They are as long as they need to be; the size of the target has no effect on the bolas. These can be easily cut loose or, if misaimed, cast aside. However, if aimed correctly, it can hinder the movement of the target indefinitely until the bolas are dealt with. The bolas can be aimed either at the lower limbs (legs) or the upper limbs (arms) of the target. If aimed at the lower limbs and the move is successful, the bolas will trip the target and restrict leg movement. If aimed at the upper limbs and the move is successful, the bolas disables one basic Move (i.e. basic punches or some basic weapons) and restricts arm movement. Doc can throw this up to 6 meters away, but the bolas are very heavy and hard to aim, making his effective range 3 meters.

I don't know how to balance this.