03-19-2016, 03:35 PM
(03-19-2016, 08:47 AM)Strazio Rockwell Wrote:I underlined revisions.(03-18-2016, 03:29 PM)Dr. McNinja Wrote: Chain-Chuks (Requires Physical Strength) - 300 OM
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Dr. McNinja arms himself with chainsaw nunchuks. In one swing, the range is about 2.5 meters. This special weapon can only be held for 30 seconds before it sputters out of gasoline. They are also pretty heavy (about 5 kg each chainsaw) which means that the attack speed is lower, which means you can see it coming more easily. The weapon is difficult to block, while easy to dodge. He only carries one set at any given time, which means that 1) if the weapon is damaged or lost during a fight, he cannot summon any more and 2) putting the chain-chuks away does not reset the gas levels.
KITE. (Requires Master Acrobat, Flight) - 300 OM
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Doc summons a corpse of a pterodactyl onto his back. The process of preparing this move lasts 5 seconds. He then uses it as a kite to fly around, and he is able to retract and extend the pterodactyl's wings to change his course at any time. He may not use any other Moves while flying, unless otherwise specified.
Nightshade Strike (Requires Physical Strength, Stealth, Debuff) - 300 OM
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If he is stealthed and within arm's length of the target, Dr. McNinja can swiftly squeeze a crucial pressure point between the neck and left shoulder, stunning the target for 5 seconds. Doc becomes unstealthed every time he uses this move. However, the specific area (as shown in the picture) must be exposed. If the target has any defenses in that area whatsoever, or if Doc is detected, the Strike will fail and he will be unstealthed anyway.
Tier 1 Super Attack: Moon Laser (Requires Area Attack, Communicator, Ranged, Ranged Materialize) - 600 OM
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Dr. McNinja summons the Moon Laser used by the McNinjaverse's Dracula. The Moon Laser aims at the coordinates of Doc's Comm. Doc cannot set the coordinates himself; the Laser will only lock onto the coordinates of his device. Once it has locked on to those coordinates, it will not keep track of the Comm's location. After 20 seconds, the laser will fire. The laser itself has a direct impact radius of 2 meters, in which the laser will do full damage, but can also inflict half damage to any within a 5 meter radius. The laser itself is one quick burst.
Chainsaw Numchucks - Are these things tiring to swing around? You mention that if they are damaged or lost he can resummon them, I imagine you are going for a "one-use and done" sorta thing with the drawbacks, is he able to resummon the weapon to get around this? Also how far out can these strike?
Kite - I don't see the purpose of this move. If you already have flight, why would you need a move that does the same thing, but in a gimped way?
Nightshade Strike - This needs Physical Strength (I think that's implied, but it's good bookkeeping). The move is a tad strong, even with it being as conditional as it is. I would nerf the stun duration to something like 5 seconds, as 15 seconds it pretty damn powerful.
Moon Laser - This would need Area Attack Proficiency since it strikes such a large area. How long does the laser fire for, a single burst or is it a sustained beam? Also I'm not sure how the targeting works, does it target Mcninja's dataverse device or does he just use that to call it in?
About "Kite", so this would be RP fodder? Can I buy it for 0 OM? (That's a thing, right?) And I'm guessing it's not okay to have a move which is a gimped version of Flight without having bought Flight.
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