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Official Move Approval IV
Quote:Does this do any damage or is it just a freeze debuff? Would hitting a person in the same area stack or refresh the debuff? You’ll need to include some other kind of downside here like an ammo limit and summon time or something. Right now there really aren’t any downsides other than having to reload, which since you have other moves at your disposal, isn’t really an actual downside.

Empire Cold Gun Prototype (300 OM, Requires Ranged, Debuff)

A small prototype gun based on a cyclotron that was built by the Empire to test if they could create a weapon that could freeze opponents solid so that they could easily arrest them, though the prototype is not as effective as they hoped. This prototype model can be drawn out from Aquamarine's Gem and is capable of launching a 3 inch wide beam of concentrated freezing solution at the opponent, and charging and firing the gun only takes one second. The beam travels as fast as a bullet, has a maximum range of 80 feet, and lasts for 8 seconds in the air before dissolving, but if it hits one of the opponent's limbs, the beam will cover the opponent's limb in the solution, which will quickly freeze the limb for 5 seconds and make it half as effective in combat for that duration, though it will not damage the opponent. In addition, if a beam were to hit a frozen limb, it would refresh the debuff/ Aquamarine does not need to focus while using the move and can use the move with other Moves and while moving, though after firing three beams the gun takes 6 seconds to reload due to running out of solution. Lastly, while using the gun only uses up small amounts of stamina, reloading the gun takes one minute, and the gun draws a big chunk of stamina from Aquamarine in order to reload, which can make the Gem more and more exhausted after each reload, and only being able to reload up to 3 times a day without using up too much stamina.

(Changes in Bold, plus when there was a 6 second reload, it was implied that the gun runs out of solution after three shots, though I made it a bit more obvious)


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Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 07-13-2015, 02:17 PM
Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 08-30-2015, 06:24 PM
Moves PSA - by Omni - 10-30-2015, 05:59 PM

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