09-15-2014, 09:43 AM
Yeah, all of that is fine. Only thing I would say is watch the grammar as it's definitely dipped below the quality threshold. You need to use capitalization etc. Obviously we don't expect a complete lack of typos but all of your paragraphs started with lower case. If you want to fix that please post the fixed version here and I'll edit it in.
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