Evolution of you and your characters story

[Gildarts]

I think I'll give this a shot, if only to prove I'm not dead xD.

Ballad:

For starters, I've abandoned my original idea to have his thoughts be Un-italicized to make it look pseudo- Third person/First Person because it just got confusing after a while. I think I've also made Ballad more of a villain while making him a bit more sympathetic. I've also made him a hell of a lot less snarky than I originally intended.

Progress: Pretty much every fight I've participated in has allowed me to progress as a writer and as a character builder. I focused more on details after the Colosseum event (something I think I still suck at,) and after the mock fight with Esdeath, focused more on character (something I think I'm great at, tbh.)

I've also, I think, focused more on story then just "participation," if The Gunsmith's Gamble has said anything about it. I've found I care more about making a good story and good characters rather than just participating for the hell of it.

As for Sans, dunno. haven't done to much with him xD.

Nice! Thanks for sharing