03-07-2016, 09:01 AM
Your move is mostly fine. The only problem I've seen with it is that I don't know how large the charged blast is. You said that it was the same size (height) as Bass, but you never told us how tall he actually is. He could be 3 feet tall, he could be 6 feet tall.
Your history also needs to include when your character was pulled from their Universe.
Your history also needs to include when your character was pulled from their Universe.